Thursday, April 4, 2013

जिन्दगी त बितेछ |

बाँकी  पनि सबै गए
आफ्नै बाटो खोज्दै,
नाङ्गो आँगनमा एक्ली
कुप्री बुढी जस्तै,
चिउडोमा हात राखी -
फर्की आउछन्  कि भन्दै 
एउटै सपना बुन्दै 
त्यहि सपना उधार्दै 
जिन्दगी त बितेछ  |




4 comments:

  1. jiwan sapana sabai nai buna
    kehi pal mai udridai jana suru garnaycha
    sarir ra dhago galdai
    sabai nildai janaycha
    aas ma
    pyas ma
    pheri bunaychau
    tadpinchau
    tadpanchau
    kehi payo jasto lagcha
    tara pheri bilauchau
    tyo sangai harauna kojchau
    tara timi afanai bunaima badiykochau
    udarda afai sabai udrina thalcha
    daar lay pheri bunna thalchau

    rati ko 3 bajay lekayko sorryy

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    1. Thank you for posting. Ramro cha.

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    2. about the poem I was going to sleep then the idea came up then got up and started writing also that 'Bilauchau was suppose to be Bilaucha' Not the best thinker late night.
      Some of your writings are very very good Very artistic well your pictures are artistic too but still well you get that compliment a lot i guess.

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    3. also about the compliment part that one does seem forced hai have to work on that but yes you good Honestly you are.

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